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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Sta.sh
I really like this drawing of Byakuya. It is neat and gives a strong battle emotion to those who see it. >.< Somethings that improve this drawing is to change the shade of colors a little bit. For example, Byakuya and his shinigami robe's color is black with pinkish shade. I do admit that pink suit suits Byakuya, but the pink is a little too strong. This makes the picture appear blurry or unclear at first sight. Believe me, first sight is very important! ^.^ Maybe a little less shade of pink on the robe and hair would be great.
Another thing I would like to critique on is the outline of the artwork. outlining of a work must be neat and done with a well choosen color. The outline of a drawing is what make a viewer catch their eye on the artwork. The outline of the 'Bleach' logo sign should be traced with a slight stronger pink in and around and the lettlers the make the sign stand out. Byakuya should be traced with a really dark grey that is lighter than black.
In general, I think you did a great job of techique and skill. This is just a little tip that I think you could use to make the drawing look better :3
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